Double the effectiveness of testimonials

Testimonial DefinitionThere’s a good reason why some websites (mine included) feature so many client testimonials. They build belief and credibility like no other copy element can. In fact, these days, prospects get suspicious if your website doesn’t feature clients or customers saying great things about your products and services.
But there’s a problem with testimonials.
According to eye path analysis—a method of studying where eye balls linger on a web page—people tend to look at testimonials rather than read them.
So a client may have given you a glowing endorsement, but beyond the fact that the testimonial is there and gets noticed, the message itself may not be getting through.
I found this recently when I was shopping for a web designer. I visited one site and was knocked out by all the testimonials that designer had—some from professionals I recognize and respect. The thing is, I didn’t actually read any. I simply looked at all the testimonials and said wow.
Obviously, you want your testimonials to get read as well as noticed, because if you do your marketing copy will be that much more persuasive. So how do you do that?
Here are some ideas:

  • Give them headlines. It may seem strange to add a headline to a testimonial, but try it. It can work well. The way I do it is by pulling a key statement from the testimonial and then creating a headline around it. A headline for a testimonial raving about a training program might be: Hard to Impress Sales Team Gives it 5 Stars. Even if prospects don’t read the actual testimonial, they’ll likely notice the headline and get the key message.
  • Bold key sections. Another way to draw attention to a specific point made in a testimonial is to bold it. I find bolds work better for testimonials than italics. (That might be because many testimonials are already italicized.) Just don’t get carried away and attempt to emphasize too much. Limit bolding to one statement or sentence.
  • Weave them into the body copy. I’m pretty sure I picked this technique up from reading Ivan Levison’s newsletter. Most people put testimonials in the website sidebar or on a separate page. That’s fine. But also insert them strategically into your copy. For example, you can start a paragraph with something like: As Jane Smith, CIO of ACME Industries, puts it, “This gizmo boosted our production line output by…”
  • Transform them into success stories. If you have a detailed testimonial from a particularly happy client, why not turn that into a success story? Just provide a bit of commentary on the work you did for the client along with the original testimonial. Voila! You now have a short, engaging success story. And I find these tend to get read more often than testimonials.

Testimonials are hard to come by and highly persuasive. So it makes sense to leverage them to the hilt. Hopefully, these tips will help you do just that.

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